Poem 5
Part2
IRRATIONAL BEHAVIOUR .
I lurk in the depts of your belly
slumbering there waiting for
you to call me up again
It's late and darke and raining hard
you'r waiting for the phone to ring
I'm waiting for the panic to set in.
You sit and stare at the wall
listening for the ring to come.
And I'm bubbling up inside you
as I hear the prayers begin inside
you'r head.
You watch you'r watch
I watch you'r heart beat faster,
as terror grip's you'r soul.
You know how I  feel
you'v felt me inside you befor.
Now I hear you'r toughts
in between you'r prayer 's
why won't the phone ring
something bad has happened?
I am feeding off thse thoughts
Iam feeding off you'r fear
of loosing someone close to you again.
By : Aileen  Nolan,
97705914@students02.wit.ie
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Fear slumbers in depts of churning stomach , waiting to 
be called up. 
 

 TIME:6 Seconds. 
zooming out from the growing fear to show full picture of stomach.


Camera zooms in on scene in a dark room. It is raining outside, the phone begins to ring 
 

TIME:10 Seconds 
2 Seconds to look towards widow. 
6 Seconds to pan around room, zoom in on phone . 
2 Seconds on ringing phone.

Close up on pounding heart with ticking watch inside as the fear begins to grow.Her heart beats ever faster. 
 

TIME: 7 Seconds. 
2 Seconds on close up of centre of heart. 
5 Seconds on zooming out slowley to reveal full view of heart.

 
 
 
She glances at pictures of loved ones on the wall. First one and then the other fearing that something bad has happened. 
 

TIME:8 Seconds. 
2 Seconds showing both pictures 
then 3 seconds zooming in on one picture and 3 seconds zooming in on the other.

Fear grow's inside her takeing control.She has felt the feeling before of fear bubbling up inside her. 

TIME : 7 Seconds zooming in on close up of fear growing in her stomach. Bubbling up and takeing over.

She answer's the phone,her worst fears are realised as she scream's. 

TIME:12 Seconds 
3 Seconds zooming in on phone. 
5 Seconds showing hand answering phone as the ringing gets louder. 
4 Seconds zooming in on screaming face as phone is answered and worst fears are realised and then fade out. 
 
 
 

 

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